All Comments on 'The Fall Ch. 03'

While I do enjoy a short, to the point story sometimes, these chapters are so short and sometimes leave the point hanging. The writing is interesting, and I'd like to see some good character and relationship development, but it's distracting to read these short cliffhangers. 1,2 an 3 could have been just one.

Keep going, though, please. I also like the little annotations; they show a real interest, and appease the sticklers of the world!

Yes the three chapters could have been combined but i'm still enjoying the story and the ideas you're pursuing. It's not size that matters it's the quality. Keep it up.

Pete

...and now I have to go buy a tuning fork.

I tried the tuning fork thing and got very little result.

Absolutely loving this story! It's very original

This series is getting good....Very kinky and my arousal level is skyrocketing waiting to read the upcoming parts.... Well done ;)