All Comments on 'The Fall of Wrath Ch. 01'

This needs to be in (Sci-Fi & Fantasy )

interesting start

I think it just needs a tag of diologue to make it even better

thank you

GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!

I've read Literotica for years and this is the first time I've felt compelled to leave a comment. I was captivated from the beginning, and hope that the remaining chapters you've hinted at follow quickly! I can't wait! Bravo!

I'm superexcited for the next chapter. I'll be checking back =)

This is more of a hobby for me and I can never guarantee that I can put new chapters out on a schedule. As of right now I am almost done with chapter three. I have a blog that I immediately publish the chapters and I use literotica for more of a target viewership. On my blog as well are some art pieces I commissioned too. I am not sure if I am allowed to share my blog link via literotica, but email me and I will share it!

Dee Dagger