by Dr_Vril
Just amazing the emotions you can evoke. Giving us only a few details, our minds embellish and expand the scene. Thank you. I notice anony is still pasting his same little pathetic comment. Sad.
Excellent writing. Even though the stark reality left me with a twinge of guilt at indulging in noncon to feed my alligators.
Id like to see the story of how she got there in stead of her retlling it but neverthe less i liked it
Useless garbage. Besides, University of William Shatner doesn't even exist. No wonder you are such a feeble writer.
This is not erotic. Too real. Rape fantasy is ok, but just like any other fantasy, let's say invisioning yourself smacking an annoying person chewing their gum to hard, is ok in fantasy, but not condoned in reality.
Powerful. Painfully so.
While I believe in the rule of law, there are times payback=retribution=justice.
Stories such as this make me nostalgic for simpler days when such individuals were offered a weekend of hunting and camaraderie by seemingly unrelated gentlemen. A one way hunt. Now it is just so darn complicated to dispose of riff raff. Sigh.
by getting a blood test, just in case the drug DID show up. Then you have LEVERAGE. You have CHOICES! You can mess with HIM, should you choose to reveal the results. That is how you get past it. Empower yourself.
You really capture the degradation and dehumanisation of rape.