All Comments on 'The Feminist I Should Be Pt. 02'

just so dumb. about as clever as the rats in The Pied Piper of Hamelin.

Johann’s secret added a nice flair of tension to the story. I felt like that’s what drove Kailee forward in the story. She was dying to know what was behind Johann + Clara’s weird relationship. You did a masterful job at getting your reader (myself) to feel what K felt.