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All Comments on 'The First Day of Christmas'

by MCTX

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IFAFILHGIFAFILHGalmost 3 years ago

This whole series has been fun.. looking forward to the next chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
stay tuned

stay tuned your ass!

jackagjackagabout 15 years ago
enticing beginning

having read and enjoyed all your stories,this one has the beginnings of a really good one. you mentioned that this ia a triology, would enjoy reading the next chapter.

Jack

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Shorter paragraphs?

Breaking up the paragraphs would make this easier to read.

Anonymous
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