All Comments on 'The Four Years: Year One Ch. 04'

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kitten0829kitten0829about 14 years ago
nice

i like how each character is progressing slowly and we're getting to know them individually as well as a unit, keep going

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Nice job!

I like charecter driven stories. You are doing a great job of developing the charecters as people that one can relate to. We all know that the sex will follow, but the key is how one gets there. Keep up the good work and please keep the submissions coming.

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Apologies in advance if the sex in my stories isn't that great. I find it hard to write things that I haven't personally experienced. Hopefully any plot and character development makes up for it.

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