All Comments on 'The Game'

That was pretty damn hot for being so short/

Lame.

Never heard of such a game but, psychologically, it is one of the sexiest things I can think of at the moment. To surreptitiously show oneself naked at a party then go through the evening knowing what you've done and knowing that someone else knows as well...so delicious! Very well done Gloria.

Blaine

Yes more! Very exciting start with lots of possibilities.

and I'd like to see it continued. But PLEASE make the bra etc 'sheer' or I'll keep thinking of sharp scissors and that does strange things in MY head.

"My ego is in tacked" !!!!! How stupid ARE you? INTACT is the word you idiot!!!!!

Sorry about the grammatical errors.

Gloria

Great start to a new idea. Can't wait to see the next one. Don't be put off by the rude comments - pointing out an error is fine, but blatant rudeness from "anonymous" is unecessary and unhelpful. Suggest he writes a story and lets us criticise it.

As an author here, I'd like to point something out to those individuals who like to hide behind the curtain and snipe with such malicious intent.

Gloria here, or any of the other writers on this site, or any other, don't *have* to put up what they write for you to read. So how about showing some common courtesy, to ensure the stories keep on arriving?

Well done for a first time! If others get hung up about grammar and structure, too bad for them. Let your imagination continue! I think the embrace at the end between strangers (especially with the age difference) came a little early in "the game" for her.....and mentioning her "bi-" side, where it hadn't even been introduced earlier was also a little distracting.

The story was a very pleasant read and introduced a lot of information in a very readable format.

Thanks for your efforts....look forward to more!

Can't wait to see how it develops.

Super great as always!

Wonderful job!

Very enjoyable Gloria, It's been a long time waiting for a new story from you. Thanks for sharing.

A clever and sexy story.

GLORIA, WOULD YOU MIND FINISH BACHELORETTE PARTY? MY DICK IS ACHING YOU DO IT. THANKS. BYE

Interesting game (although it would seem to make blackmail a real risk),and I’m curious as to where you will take the story next.

You threw me with one sentence, though. You wrote, “My ego's in tacked”, but I’m pretty sure you meant ‘intact’.