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Click hereMy hands trembled on the top of Kris' head, and I cried out as the first shot burst from my cock, by hips thrusting forward and my upper back slapping against the wall. Kris recoiled slightly, trying to follow my sudden movements and surprised by the cum. Her jaw, lips and tongue moved frantically, not knowing what to do. By the third ejection, I could feel the hot cum against the lukewarmth of her mouth, working its way back up my shaft past her lips, but this knowledge barely registered in my mind. It was a distant sensation, a scene half-forgotten or half-remembered, but not fully experienced. My mind was no longer in control of my thoughts or least of all, my body. It kept me in a standing position. Besides that, there was only my cock, pumping hot cum into a wet orifice. I grunted and shook with each ejaculation, my back glued by gravity to the wall. Little by little, my awareness returned, and I looked down at Kris.
My cum was dripping out of her mouth and down her chin onto her breasts, legs and the floor between her legs. She was still working my cock rhythmically with her mouth and hand, her other hand still gently rolling around my anus and balls. She looked up at me and her face was covered with mild surprise and wonder. I smiled and whispered "Thank you -- that was amazing!" She smiled and removed my cock from her mouth, still pumping it slightly with her hand. She wiped cum off her chin with a finger.
"Rub it on your nipples" I suggested, and she complied, tracing her finger around her left nipple slowly and deliberately. I spread my stance and lowered my cock to her right breast. "Squeeze some cum onto this nipple." Still wrapped around my cock, she squeezed her hand, a little too hard, and a large dollop of cum dripped onto her nipple. I leaned closer and touched it with the tip of my cock. She moved it around and we both moaned with pleasure.
- COMMENTS
innominatewriterover 17 years agoI thought this story was incredibly sexy but I feel like it is incomplete. For what I've read, I can only assume that the Shane has had romantic feelings for Kristine for at least a small amount of time. It almost sounds like he's trying to convince himself that he only sees her as a friend but he really has deeper feelings for her.
Either way, I think you need to find a way to explore the dynamics of their relationship a little more. Maybe add more of a conversation to the begining and as the conversation progresses there can be asides to the reader, explaining his feelings/thoughts/whatever about Kristine and their relationship. He is her best friend, who obviously wants her, and hasn't expressed his feelings because... she has an affinity for bad guys without realizing it? If his best female friend was in so many bad relationships, he might have more of a reaction to that (i.e. being protective, thinking angry/violent thoughts about her exes, etc.)
The passion for each other is there and its conveyed really well. Shane tries to control his urges until he's sure she feels the same and then he reacts passionately. Its very sexy and sweet. One thing that was a little weird, the dialouge where he's giving her tips doesn't quite fit with the... lust? He keeps saying please. I mean, i understand he's trying to make the experience different from her past horrible ones, but you say "please" when you pass the salt. He can be sweet without being overly proper and polite.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. So don't leave me hanging:D
