All Comments on 'The Good Neighbor'

Started good not sure about the two girls at the ned though just my preffrence though. I owuld have liked to have heard more about the mum.

suggest getting an editor

...I'd like u 2 write another installment(chapter)!

Please learn the difference between 'lose' and 'loose'.

And between 'striped' and 'stripped'.

Story started well, then went rapidly downhill. Crap.

normally don't read str8 stuff or even lez stuff but this was GOOD

damn the naysayers

chapter 2 when?

Now to follow-up and see how far everyone goes. Does Momma get into BDSM like her Daughter and Roxanne.

or do they stay the course and on Masterbate while the Young girls get into Spanking,Servitude.

Went from dry and mediocre to creepy really quickly.