All Comments on 'The Good Provider Ch. 02'

of the story line. Keep up the good work.

I don't usually read ongoing tales but this one is exceptional. I am finding I can't wait for the next chapter. Excellent development. Great job!

what great build-up you've got going. Wonderful writing, wonderful characters. Hurry on with chapter three.

Hey Jane. Thought I'd leave a comment for your story. I can't wait to see where it goes next. ;) Keep them coming.

The flashbacks to the haircuts were fun and original. I can't wait to see where you take the story next.

Can't wait till next chapter!

Love the charater and pass detail. The whole taboo thing they are both feeling and both sides to the story... keep the great story coming!

a bit unrealistic no guy that loved his sister that way and had screwed up like that would invite her to live with him also no way she would accept after what happened keep it sounding realistic and believable

I love how this story is developing, Well-written, very believable. I especially like your use of italics for internal thoughts