All Comments on 'The Harloteer'

A little more editing would help but this is a cock stroker!

My editor has been over my knee and a properly proof read version is awaiting approval by site admins.

Interresting beginning of a story which can go in many directions. Who is Candy ? How did she became the sub she is ? She seems to have been a respectable young women who learned a profession. Is she with Al on a permanent basis or is she married to someone else? What is her future ? Who is Al ? He would have or had many submissives. How does he work to "make" a harlot. Who are Carmen and Justin ? What do they do together ? What are they looking for ? Will they have Candy once again ? You have potentially many stories here, going forward in time or back in time, since you seem to have caught four peoples in the middle of each of their stories.

Really enjoyable, you definitely can go many ways with this! Great job!