All Comments on 'The Housemate'

More please

Looking forward to more of this story . Dump the the girlfriend go for the friend !!!!

have been planning this all along, while they have been enjoying each other and have decided to include the boyfriend in the fun - now wouldn't that be delicious

... "We went to a local Thai restaurant, and were led to a fairly small circular table in the back .... I sat opposite her father, and the girls took the spaces between us."

I don't think our hero could have extended his hand all the way to Faye's crotch - not when they were seated at right angles to each other. Seated next to each other, chairs facing the same direction, barely possible if, but only if, Janice made a strenuous effort not to see what was happening

I intended to give this story 3 stars but somehow - a lack of attention on my part, I guess - I gave it 5. The physical problems mention above make that inappropriate, but the pacing of the story is well done - I'd like to see another story by this author

Yes, more please ... nice writing style !

I'm really looking forward to the next story in the series!!!

More character background on principals involved in story would be my sole suggestion . Very curious as to what first dialogue between housemate & narrator would sound like post - under the table manual tryst !

Nicely paced. A good example of less is more. I agree that it's very implausible that the g/f wouldn't have noticed but I'm willing to suspend disbelief.

This deserves more chapters ... and quickly :) Thanks!

is there to be one?