All Comments on 'The Hunger Ch. 06'

I liked the story. I read the first one then skipped to this one to see how things had progressed. You might consider a bit more editing and proof reading. I noticed Jim changes to John when they went to nap. Other than that I liked it and am looking forward to more.

A truly wonderful series. No one writes better anal than you do. I can only guess why.

So glad you take some time to explore the feelings that go with all this delightful sex. So far the relationships have been a bit perfect, I mean just because they swing doesn't mean that all jealousies and disagreements are banished. Wondering if you will explore that aspect of human relationship in forthcoming chapters? Not that I am complaining - I love the sex, the love and passion, and the adventure!