All Comments on 'The Hunt'

About their lives together.

The hunt and seduction scenes were well written. I'd look forward to seeing more of the story that included his back story and perhaps the morning after. The ending was good, it just wasn't as strong as the rest of the earlier parts. I still really liked the concept.

I enjoyed the story but I couldn't help but notice that the background to this story was ripped off straight from Michelle West's The Sacred Hunt series. Hopefully that wasn't intentional

This story is loosedly based on the legend of Herne the Hunter and the Wild Hunt, and the legend of the White-breasted maiden. Apart from that it is a work of fantasy fiction and is not intended to be a rip-off of any other stories.

~ DarkAngel_001

what a florid drivel. I shall need a shower now.

Ancient legends are public domain and there's no plagiarism here!

This well told tale of Herne's everlasting hunt finally resolved was sweet and the detailed chase and sex scenes had my heart (and perhaps other places) pounding. I see that this is your first submission, please continue to write! I'll keep track of your profile.