All Comments on 'The Hybrid Machine'

decent idea but the execution failed completely. It seems like the grammatical usage and spellin were roughly a five year old level... excluding the vulgarities of course. In short this was a total waste of my time.

Good idea, poorly executed. Loin? Vary? Spell checker isn't going to catch those typos, you have to read through what you wrote. If you can't, find an editor.

find an editor who has a passing acquaintance with the english language!

Good story. Intresting title.

a few errors in spelling...

But all together this wasa very good story!

I couldn't even get through the story. It might have been a good idea at some point, but the spelling and grammatical errors were excessive and distracting.

loin? really? once in a while an error in spelling can be overlooked, but all the way through?

Fairly hard to read with misspellings and two words that should have been one ( "there for," "consul," et.al).