All Comments on 'The Institute and Adam'

I just came across this story and am both surprised

no one has commented and enjoyed it very much.

The only drawback is I feel there should be further

chapters taking the client through their stay.

Really good scene. I would have appreciated more description of Adam's response to his stroking after he came. I understand, and have felt, that continued stroking after climax is very painful

This is a good part 1 of a multi-part story. I want to know what happens next. You devote so much space to the background and purpose of the Institute and then leave us hanging,

I am very tired of reading well-written, well-plotted stories that are then ruined by wrong words and terrible typos. You did well in keeping typos to a minimum, but you have one glaring error:

The “palate” you strapped him onto on page 1 is defined as the roof of your mouth; the sense of taste. I believe you meant pallet, one definition of which is a portable platform for handling, storing, or moving materials and packages. Of course, there also is palette, but that the board a painter holds and mixes pigments on. There are a number of good dictionaries on line. I strongly suggest you use one. -- shemar