All Comments on 'The Jamie Born Experiment'

On a scale of 1-to-5, this story gets a 12! Should you choose to do so, you have the potential of writing best-seller fiction. (Okay, you'll have to tone down the sexual content.) This is a fine piece of fiction, and I am confident that you could make a name for yourself in the public arena.

Not many stories capture them effectively. This one did. Very hot. Very intimate. Very moving.

Great work. You captured the thoughts of all the characters well, and combined the romance with the eroticism perfectly. And even though I saw the twist with david right off the bat, it still made for a great read. Keep it up!

very nice....an erotic fantasy...

this is one of the most compelling stories yet. it was slightly predictable about who the secret lover was, but it was awesome all the same. i would like to see david trying these tactics with Jamie on the hot professor maybe? keeep up the good work

Very professional. Total story. Built your characters, let them live, great sex, just the whole shebang. Thank you.

Wonderful attempt at an interesting and highly erotic tale.

Alot of writers can get this topic so very wrong, but i think you managed to get is damn close to perfect.

Thankyou for writing it and sharing it with us.

I think this is one of the best stories I have ever read here!!! Keep up the GREAT WORK!

This is the first time I've rated a story and I've been reading Literotica for almost 3 years. This is my favorite story that I've read by far! I've told my husband how I'd love to replay so many parts of this story. Wild sex, crazy fantasy's, without going overboard. Will there be a sequel? Are the girls going to help David get his hot teacher in bed? (Please?)

This is one of the best stories I have read - the characters were full of feelings, a nice story line and the intimate descriptions had their intended affect on me. AMAZING!!

Oh my god can it get any better?

Damn close to perfect, good job

I think you just outlined my top fantasy.

was one of the hottest stories I've ever read...that's like three of my fantasies all wrapped up into one. Thanks for sharing...

One of the best stories ever !!!

I could almost feel like I was in the story, great !

Hot one, please write more like this one !

A little too many "ooohhhs" and "aaaaahhhs" but still fantastic writing.

One of the best and most complete stories I have read. Excellent on all levels.

Sexy story. Speaking from the perspective of someone who's been raped multiple times, tho... the scenario's not all that likely. Jamie might have enjoyed it at the time, but she would feel empty later and guilty for having enjoyed it at all. And forgiveness wouldn't be instantaneous or even that quick, even for a link that close. There would be too many strong emotions to work out. And that takes time. So... hot story but unlikely scenario (at least on the part of the girls' reactions).

Sexy sexy! Really loved the story.. Very hot and passionate. Absolutely amazing...Hehehe... Made me tingle in all kinds of places, and get rather damp... Will agree though with the other person who said there were a bit too many oohs and ahhs, but I'll forgive you. :D wonderful!

This was a very nice story. It had a good plot (though predictable), characters who actually had feelings other than overwhelming lust and passion all the time (except it's a bit hard to find people as fucked up as them), and hot sex scenes.

So the reader is supposed to accept Jamie's forgiveness of David at face value, because the rape made the victim feel sufficient pleasure? Sorry, but this reader sees no reason presented for Jamie to forgive.

That was amazing. Really great, i loved all the details and the build up. Amazing!

This story had everything from start to finish. The right amount of details for each individual topic from the blackmailing through to the end. Great writing

yeah falling for your friends is always complicated but extreamly hot. they know you the best and it is so comfortable you are not afraid to be a bit more experimental.

One of the best stories I have ever read, Thank you for sharing your talent. I hope you write more soon.