All Comments on 'The Journey Ch. 02'

by HubrisMaker

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

More, more! please !

surenderme08surenderme08over 11 years ago
A True 5!

Well HubrisMaker you have a really hot story going here. Keep filing the chapters please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

that would piss me off cock blocked 2x in 1 night by granddad.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 11 years ago
Someone needs to give Nana some sleeping pills.

So close but still so far away from fucking his mom,but he may have laid the ground work to have all of her, the way he wants her to be.

I want to read about the first time he shoves his big cock up her pussy and shows her just how much of a man he really is.

All they need now is some alone time.

I hope that he nails his Auntie Bushy and gives her the fuck of her life.

Thanks for the read.

HubrisMakerHubrisMakerover 11 years agoAuthor
coming soon

Thanks for your feedback!

3rd instalment coming soon ....

simba_simba_over 11 years ago
Very nice

Nice build up and interesting plot with a lot of potential... Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice

5 stars...just keep it going slow rather than a rush......u're a talented writer

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

excellent base....... super duper lyk.... lookin forward for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good Story but Long Wait for next part...

Awesome story, nice build up, excellent narration... but the delay in posting next part is a mood spoiler. If you expedite the process of posting next parts.. it would add to the popularity of this story.

MotorpenisMotorpenisover 11 years ago
Sexcellent 5/5

Amazing story, cant wait for the next instalment.

BTW, Taekwando does not have a brown belt. There is a brown belt in Karate. The equivalent of that in Taekwando would be a Red or Red-Black belt.

Thank Me later,

MotorPenis

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
king

superb waiting for next part

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Bhosdike..agey ki kab likheyga

Abey ab apni maa chodega bhi...ki thaam ke sota rahega...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great!

Probably the most erotic mother-son story I've read here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More!

One of the most amazing series I've read here!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great!

This was great! We need more from you....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Loved your story.

This is the best erotic mother son story.you are a wonderful story writer.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 1 year ago

Surprisingly Ilike the story. However, I consider Nina to be a tease. Eventually, mother and son will make love but will it be worth it?

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