All Comments on 'The Journey of Victoria Morgan'

Grow up, your writing is unbelievably juvenile and in serious need of editing. Whoever you claim is editing, get rid of them and find a new one.

I completed the last one but it hasn't been posted.

It seems interesting. I still am not sure why you didn't finish your last one before starting another.

Sorry, I couldn't get past the first few paragraphs. It reads too much like a play.

please update soon. It is a nice opening to your story.