All Comments on 'The Katie Chronicles Ch. 02'

by SallyG

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Touching

Kind of sweet, and touching in its own way. Hope you keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
It must have been me...

Great story, SallyG; very enjoyable and really well put together. I thought you were writing about me! Had a very similar experience (but without the sexual ending, worst luck!). Nick.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Kinda

Kinda slow, kinda cute.

Lukas

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
That brings back memories

That story sounded so familiar to me.....at least your story had a happy ending

TaurusGuyTaurusGuyover 19 years ago
Nice read

Like cotton candy--hot, sweet, and light as air. Fun read! A whole lot like a story I've been working on. S'pose I've got some re-writes to do. :)

SmokeEaterSmokeEaterabout 19 years ago
Well done!

Just very well written, very sweet, yet very hot. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
up and cumming writer

Sally, I have read plenty of stories, enough to know you are well on your way. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Well done SallyG

your writing is brilliant and imaginative and well worth reading - love the way you tell a story - hope there is more to cum.

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 11 years ago
Sweet!

Your characters have warmth and lovability.

You handle dialog well. You could try screenwriting.

It's a sparer form, but you seem well-suited.

Thanks for sharing a warm memory! "+))

yesterdaysyesterdaysover 8 years ago

Wonderful story. Hope you'll write another one!++

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great writing...

...wish there was lots and lots more...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Agree with Anonymous

Never too late for Chapter 2

MajorRewriteMajorRewriteover 2 years ago

After all these years, I’m still waiting for an update on Kyle fucking her mom some more. Hahahaha.

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