by SallyG
Kind of sweet, and touching in its own way. Hope you keep writing.
Great story, SallyG; very enjoyable and really well put together. I thought you were writing about me! Had a very similar experience (but without the sexual ending, worst luck!). Nick.
That story sounded so familiar to me.....at least your story had a happy ending
Like cotton candy--hot, sweet, and light as air. Fun read! A whole lot like a story I've been working on. S'pose I've got some re-writes to do. :)
Just very well written, very sweet, yet very hot. Keep up the good work.
Sally, I have read plenty of stories, enough to know you are well on your way. Thanks
your writing is brilliant and imaginative and well worth reading - love the way you tell a story - hope there is more to cum.
Your characters have warmth and lovability.
You handle dialog well. You could try screenwriting.
It's a sparer form, but you seem well-suited.
Thanks for sharing a warm memory! "+))
After all these years, I’m still waiting for an update on Kyle fucking her mom some more. Hahahaha.