by SallyG
After all these years, I’m still waiting for an update on Kyle fucking her mom some more. Hahahaha.
Your characters have warmth and lovability.
You handle dialog well. You could try screenwriting.
It's a sparer form, but you seem well-suited.
Thanks for sharing a warm memory! "+))
your writing is brilliant and imaginative and well worth reading - love the way you tell a story - hope there is more to cum.
Sally, I have read plenty of stories, enough to know you are well on your way. Thanks
Just very well written, very sweet, yet very hot. Keep up the good work.
Like cotton candy--hot, sweet, and light as air. Fun read! A whole lot like a story I've been working on. S'pose I've got some re-writes to do. :)
That story sounded so familiar to me.....at least your story had a happy ending
Great story, SallyG; very enjoyable and really well put together. I thought you were writing about me! Had a very similar experience (but without the sexual ending, worst luck!). Nick.
Kind of sweet, and touching in its own way. Hope you keep writing.