All Comments on 'The Key to Night Ch. 01'

I enjoyed this chapter and think it's a great start. I hope there is more.

You left alot unexplained, many questions unanswered as well as it being overall not vary long if this was meant to be a tease you pulled it off cause i really want to know what happens next

You Didn't give enough for me to form an opinion on way or another. I know you wanted to have things start off as a mystery, but this was rediculos. Be glad I desided to give you the benafit of a dought! I would have given you a 1!

A bit too short. It is a good start. The premise is a good one and could make a good story, but you need more to drag the reader in. I would think if Ch. 2 is as good, it would possibly have been best to put them together. You seem to have a good cast of characters that once developed will make up a great story.

I liked your story i really did but i was getting lost.