All Comments on 'The Key to Night Ch. 04'

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canndcanndalmost 14 years ago

I am a tiny bit confused. When is the present time happening? It seemed in modern day yet she was alive in 1876 and was turned as a young woman...maybe give us a clearer idea of what time she is living with Merrick in. I like this added detail. But does Merrick know she has the visions? Is that why he chose her to be his queen? Again, really try to submit these chapters in longer forms. Combine them together maybe. They just end too quickly. It is hard to stay in the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
next chapter???

when's the next chapter coming out?

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