by Freakyshark
Make another one where she actually does get kidnapped by that guy...Ps. Im the first to comment :P xoxo Lura
It would help if you had an editor to check your spelling and grammar. I guess the idea and plot are ok, but the action is too compressed, like a guy's dream gone wild.
Spelling, grammar and sentence structure.
Why is it always women are the victims ? I would rather see unruly men get this treatment sometime? Stripped them naked, wax them too! Get some baby girl clothes, diapers too ? Humiliate and don't stop. I did something like this to my two- timing boyfriend!
Anonymous, because we bitches love it and we are only satisfied when we are treated like the fucking worthless whores we are.