All Comments on 'The Kidnapping'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
You should.....

Make another one where she actually does get kidnapped by that guy...Ps. Im the first to comment :P xoxo Lura

aznlookinguyaznlookinguyover 11 years ago
yes and no

It would help if you had an editor to check your spelling and grammar. I guess the idea and plot are ok, but the action is too compressed, like a guy's dream gone wild.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Stopped Reading After the First Two Lines

Spelling, grammar and sentence structure.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Stupid alley girl?

Why is it always women are the victims ? I would rather see unruly men get this treatment sometime? Stripped them naked, wax them too! Get some baby girl clothes, diapers too ? Humiliate and don't stop. I did something like this to my two- timing boyfriend!

ElizabethOliverfieldsElizabethOliverfieldsalmost 11 years ago

Anonymous, because we bitches love it and we are only satisfied when we are treated like the fucking worthless whores we are.

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