All Comments on 'The Last of the White Tigers Ch. 06'
by telanna
- 27 Comments
Kamattlockover 12 years agoI am glad you are continuing this story and I only saw a few errors not too bad and they didn't detract from the story.
Anonymousover 12 years agoIt was really interesting & amusing. I love it! I hope you will update more soon!
katgoddess1over 12 years agoShe comes from out of the blue to claim her mate and her mate's position. It sounds like something a man would do. I cannot wait to see the sparks fly!
Anonymousover 12 years agoThe story is great but what I don't get is that she wants to be an equal to Don but will come and want to become Master Alpha..how does that make them equal if she just comes in and takes his position from him if she beats him? And with the way it looks she will get it. What I want to know is how they will be equal if she takes his Position??
Anonymousover 12 years agoGreat story . . . . . please don't let it end. I can't wait for chapter 7. There is going to be a big bang when Kayleagha and the Master Alpha finally meet.
Anonymousabout 12 years agonext please soon...such a good outline! need more soon!
Anonymousabout 12 years agoPLEASE MORE !!!! THIS IS SO CATCHING , TO LEAVE RIGHT WHEN THEY ABOUT TO MEET EACH OTHER IS JUJST PLAIN CRUEL!!!:::::::::::::::::::::::::::(
silverkitty09about 12 years agoPlease you need to get chapter 7 out soon. I'm dieing to know more on this it's driving me nuts to see how Don is going to act when he finds out who his mate is :)
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoI just read all 6 chapters and from the first chapter i found its just dragged its arse. So much being told and its chapter 6 and gone nowhere. What i'm saying is half the stuff written is just wasted space and each chapter is only 2 pages if we're lucky, filling the story with a whole lot of nonosence like stuffing a chicken to make it look bigger then what it is. I'm glad it finally came to an end i don't wish to read anymore. What you wrote in these 6 immaturely written chapters could have been simplified down to 2 maybe 3 decent size chapters if written better. But good luck with the rest. If i was grading this story it would be a C maybe a C+ for effort.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoSuch an awesome story im hooked!! Please bring out the next chapter I so cannot wait to see what happens when her and Don get to meet!!!
Speedy1106over 11 years agoHi, just found your story and enjoyed it a lot. Just wandering where the rest of the chapters are? Please finish the story. Wana find out what happens.
Speedy1106over 11 years agoIt doesn't seem that the author is going to finish the story. Would have loved to read what happens. Seems a lot of the authors are not finishing their stories which sucks.
Speedy1106about 11 years agoSeems the author has lost interest in the story. I know its hard to write a story, but its dissapointing when the authors don't finish the story.
Masters_slavealmost 11 years agoI really like your story please continue writing it. You have a very unique writing style that is a joy to read.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoPlease continue I LOVE this story and it is really heartbreaking if you have stopped you are very talented.
yvonne299almost 11 years agoYou should just write the next chapter and print it if you do not have an editor as we love your stories very much :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI love your story :-) but it seems a bit rushed ?? Can you slow it down a bit ?? Other then that I great job and btw you did wonderful with out a editor
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