All Comments on 'The Last of the White Tigers Ch. 07A'

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tomnorristomnorrisabout 1 year ago

GREAT Story so far can't wait to red what happens next.

tomtrek72tomtrek72almost 2 years ago

A GREAT story so far, Can't wate for the rest.

tomtrek72tomtrek72about 2 years ago

Great story, can't wait to read what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More

Can you please finish this story. Its a favorite of mine

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
ouch

ouch, that's what left my mouth after i punched the table cause this story's next part was nowhere to be found, please do something about that

Katatude4LifeKatatude4Lifeover 8 years ago
Nothing since 2013, another dead end story unfinished

Don't bother with responses to this story as the writer has most likely moved on in real life and no longer writes. Check the dates of the chapters. It has been forgotten as hundreds of others.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I'm in LOOOOOVVVVE.....

I really really loved this story.... I hope to read much more as the story progresses with Kay and her taking over as Alpha.. My favourite paranormal author is Lora Leigh and her Breed series and this is so very similar in story line to her work.... Keep it up! Keep it up! Keep it up!

xcorchxcorchabout 9 years ago
Miss You

A Nice series, i hope you are able to pick it up again, i look foward to seeing the next installment

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Plz update

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

when you are going to write the story???please do it quickly....

ourroomourroomover 9 years ago
Please continue

I hope that you will continue to write this story! I absolutely love it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Why have you stopped writing? I love the story..

Butterflies1974Butterflies1974almost 10 years ago
Great story line

I'm loving this story line. Yes it's moving fast but it's keeping up with everything. I hope to see more of this story. I love ending this with the adoption.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
MORE please

Great story line, just enough unrest to keep one on their toes waiting for what comes next. Hopfully that will be the meeting on Kay and Don. Please finish this story!!!!

chococat452chococat452over 10 years ago
love it

Amazing storyline and I love the characters. Cant wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More

I have read all 7 chapters of this. The storyline is fantastic and I can't WAIT for the the next chapter ^_^

jigglipuffjigglipuffover 10 years ago
Please

Please post the next chapter! I love this series!

Wildman28Wildman28over 10 years ago
MORE!!!

I have read the series at least 6 times now so I can keep up with any new chapters. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

angelicbeautyangelicbeautyover 10 years ago

I have reread your stories and k am looking forward to reading more....great chapters!!! Please post more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I am looking forward to the next chapter

I am looking forward to reading more ^^ very well done

yvonne299yvonne299almost 11 years ago

Great I am glad you have done this chapter now for the rest please.

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Wildman28Wildman28almost 11 years ago
great

Absolutely love this series. Was extatic when the newest one posted. I hope u continue to write. Lookin forward to the next posting.

AlydenAlydenalmost 11 years ago
NEXT PLEASE!

I hope you write next one! I like the story

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 11 years ago
Wow, here you are, two years later.

I'm surprised you came back but it will be nice to have a conclusion to your story.

This chapter was a bit choppy, which is to be expected after a long hiatus. The plot is simplistic, which I don't mind but the characters are so one dimensional. They seem like puppets. Their reactions are not natural and the dialogue is wooden. For example, Kay sets eyes on a little girl, decides that she wants her and the girl and her grandmother are thrilled. Unlikely. Most kids don't want a complete stranger to be their mommy, especially when they have a loving family member already looking after them. It seemed rushed and just didn't sit right. Every event in the chapter seemed forced.

If you take to time to really flesh out the characters and get into the details of the storyline, it will be much more enjoyable to read. An editor would also help with some of the grammatical errors.

Thanks for coming back to your story, though! I hope you stick with it this time.

KamattlockKamattlockalmost 11 years ago
Finally

I am happy to see that you are continuing this story too bad it is so short I can't wait to read the next chapter although I might just have to go back and read the first 6 to refresh my memory keep up the great writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

More soon please

MsTaylorMsTayloralmost 11 years ago
i loved it

I can't wait to read more!!! I want more!!! I want more!!!

angelicbeautyangelicbeautyalmost 11 years ago

Thank you so much for writing again. I hope that all is well with you. This story is great please continue

manimawmanimawalmost 11 years ago

damnnnnnnn goodddddddd..........hurry up for remaining chapters...plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Please continue!

Please continue! This is great! Can't wait to read more.

foxy_lady76foxy_lady76almost 11 years ago

Welcome back! I'm glad your continuing on with the story. i enjoy the each and everyone of the characters. I will look forward to the next chapter.

RheamistressRheamistressalmost 11 years ago

Do you have plans to expand this story? I hope so. It has the potential to go for more chapters. :)

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