All Comments on 'The Late Starter'

by Otazel

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Good Beginning

I really liked Jon and Julia's story.

Will there be more chapters?

There are definitely lots of lessons he could teach her!

northbaybearnorthbaybearalmost 16 years ago
Very well done!

Scored it a five (in spite of several small errors) as it was well-written--concise, excellent flow, passionate, good dialogue, and realistic.

Thanks for an enjoyable read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
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So your main character is just a dumb cu lnt

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

A lovely story, and Jon’s a lucky young man. Reminds me a bit of the essay by Benjamin Franklin, the 18th Century American diplomat and inventor. Franklin’s essay, absolutely scandalous for the time, was about the many advantages to seducing older women.

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