by Otazel
I really liked Jon and Julia's story.
Will there be more chapters?
There are definitely lots of lessons he could teach her!
Scored it a five (in spite of several small errors) as it was well-written--concise, excellent flow, passionate, good dialogue, and realistic.
Thanks for an enjoyable read.
A lovely story, and Jon’s a lucky young man. Reminds me a bit of the essay by Benjamin Franklin, the 18th Century American diplomat and inventor. Franklin’s essay, absolutely scandalous for the time, was about the many advantages to seducing older women.