by Otazel
A lovely story, and Jon’s a lucky young man. Reminds me a bit of the essay by Benjamin Franklin, the 18th Century American diplomat and inventor. Franklin’s essay, absolutely scandalous for the time, was about the many advantages to seducing older women.
Scored it a five (in spite of several small errors) as it was well-written--concise, excellent flow, passionate, good dialogue, and realistic.
Thanks for an enjoyable read.
I really liked Jon and Julia's story.
Will there be more chapters?
There are definitely lots of lessons he could teach her!