All Comments on 'The Law of Attraction Ch. 04'

Hmm so Jamie is pregnant with Jeffs child?

Having read this story all I can say is that it is one of the best pieces of fiction I have ever read. Better than "The Virgin Mary and the birth of Christ" I congratulate you on your creativity and look forward to seeing much more.

Hi guys, I just wanted to say thankyou for your supportive comments.

I know I have not written on Lit for a long while but I just wanted to let you know that I am working on Chapter 5 which is written from Ashley's perspective. Both Jamie's story and Ashley's story are stories in their own right but I am attempting to weave the two stories together so that the whole becomes greater than the sum of it's parts, wish me luck!

I have to say that in the first two chapters, I thought this was just another crossdresser's story but BOY WAS I EVER WRONG!!!!! This is a beautiful story that is the dream I've had since I was a child, to become a beautiful and complete woman. You have even added the one thing that all us girls dream of, becoming pregnant. You have truely become my favorite author

High five for you and Jamie look forward to Ashleys perspective