All Comments on 'The Lawyer and the Killer Ch. 04'

You try to make yourself sound worldly but I think you need to get your head out of your ethnocentric arse. The above comment I found offensive. Oh I know this is just a story and I'll be told to get real but there was no need to go in this offensive direction. Having done so the author shows his bias.

I'll finish reading this and will ignore these comments in relation to how many stars I give this.

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This is an apology from the author in response to a comment from anonymous. I completely forgot we have an international readership. There are several overtly nationalistic comments that I should have expunged before getting approval for the story. I am no self-praising egotistical American. I have been to parts of Europe and parts of Australia, and the women are wonderful! They are beautiful, vivacious, and delightful. But I am proud of the values of a western culture shared by billions around the world that encourages free will and creative expression. I am sorry. I will be more considerate in the future. I promise. carvohi

Im not a critic who wants to rip you apart, i read for enjoyment and i have gotten alot of enjoyment from your story. I look forward to the next chapter,

thank you

Quite the dark tale of entregue from the underworld of crime,that skirts society and is always just out of sight, waiting to pop it's ugly head up bringing fear to the rest of normal society.

Not giving her well being a second thought, Susan walking in a deserted parking garage alone, wasn't the smartest thing that she could have done, but it only takes a second to let down ones guard to find themselves in trouble.

Well done and a very interesting read, and I'll be waiting to see how he gets her and himself out of the pickle that they are in.

Caught again. I wish she had been able to stay free. Perhaps Shawn can save her.

Great chapter, I love this Shawn is so crazy but in a good way and Susan damn about time she figured out she might be into him

In terms of back story and exploring their motivations.

I think Shawn's thoughts regarding American women and free society are appropriate for *Shawn*.

The thoughts and opinions expressed by the characters do not necessarily reflect those of the author.

Sheeshe! Get over yourself Anon!

... thanks for the apology, but I still really wonder about this whole "only in America" thing, especially as Europe is explicitly mentioned. There are enough societies in the world where women don't count and even in our Western culture men often try to remain the ones in charge but to think that the US of A are any different in this is simply ridiculous!!!

Sorry, but as a woman from Europe this ruined the whole story for me big time!!!!!

I apologize again. I have an editor who checked the upcoming chapter five and cleaned it up. I am not deliberately crude or ethno anything, just stupid. Suppose a girl met someone they could like but whose insensitivity really turned them off. Don't blow this off. You must have liked some aspects of my story before you got angry. Could any girl overcome they're own anger if they saw someone was trying to change? If you read this, e-mail me your thoughts. There could be a story and a lesson there. carvohi@hotmail.com

I liked your story, but either you or your editor need a lesson in the proper usage of there, their, and they're. I won't bust on you for that, just a friendly suggestion.

I'm glad I beat you to chapter four. How's it going?

I am glad that you are happy. That makes me happy, too.

You know what? I found that your stories are readable and I even enjoyed some of them. Good luck. The anon.