All Comments on 'The Legal Problem: Jason Joins'

The final part is in the submission queue now. It should be up within next weekend.

The writing of this part is so much better than your first. It had been awhile since I had read the first part, so I re-read it before reading part 2.

This is an extremely interesting story. The maturity of the son is remarkable. The openness and acceptance of Carla is remarkable. I do not completely understand Robert's character since I have never felt about a woman as he does Sara. With that said, it is a shame that real life people can not be a self-assured, self-confident and have such a solid grasp of self-worth, ego and id. If only humans could be a psychologically, psychiatrically, and emotionally developed, I wonder what the human race could achieve. 5 star series, to-date.