All Comments on 'The Legal Problem: Jason Joins'

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Foxterot7aFoxterot7a11 months ago

This is an extremely interesting story. The maturity of the son is remarkable. The openness and acceptance of Carla is remarkable. I do not completely understand Robert's character since I have never felt about a woman as he does Sara. With that said, it is a shame that real life people can not be a self-assured, self-confident and have such a solid grasp of self-worth, ego and id. If only humans could be a psychologically, psychiatrically, and emotionally developed, I wonder what the human race could achieve. 5 star series, to-date.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Much Improved

The writing of this part is so much better than your first. It had been awhile since I had read the first part, so I re-read it before reading part 2.

cocputcocputabout 12 years agoAuthor
Part-3 submitted

The final part is in the submission queue now. It should be up within next weekend.

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