All Comments on 'The Library'

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arbenitrearbenitreabout 14 years ago
Mmmmmm

Very hot! That girl needs a little work, however. I like that she is well on her way, though, as shown by these words: "...to show what a good sub i can be, to realize my boundaries are by no means rigid, and no longer at my discretion."

How very apt! And astute. And true to her heart.

CeliaisAlienaCeliaisAlienaalmost 14 years ago
A gripping scenario

Yes, that very same quote is one that stuck in my mind too! *Very* good line, in what is a fiercely well-imagined situation: I feel almost a tense, claustrophobic reaction just reading it. Edgy and exciting, and I know I would love further adventures

qarlcueqarlcuealmost 14 years ago
Was in the room

I was in the room. I was sitting and watching. I saw you tremble, shudder, tense, squirm, utter your distressed sighs, and practically collapse in release. Powerful stuff. Thanks.

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