All Comments on 'The Lodge'

one for her, and one for him.

Dear Author, are you too dense?

There s no Loving Wife in your story.

(by Paul in rio)

from your 1st story I think you can do much better. You should let him find his balls as big or as small as they are.

Nobody deserves to humiliated or treated with cruelty bjust because you love that woman.

For those men who like a blush of humiliation old Albert has found the perfect Loving Wife. Somewhat reluctantly she goes with his desires and in this FANTASY, an extremely well written one, she pushes, gently, his buttons. Keep writing.

THIS STORY LEAVES A LOT TO CONSIDER. LIKE WHY DOES A CHANGE TO A WIMPERING CUCK AND WAS ONLY THINKING OF HIS LOVE FOR HIS PARTNER. DONT FORGET ABOUT SLEEPING DOGS. TK U MLJ LV NV

Eat cum shit and stand in line.a -1

since the beginning of time....

I just stepped in a pile of sick fetish shit. If anyone thinks this story has a loving wife they need locking up due to mental illness.

When he gets home, force her to strip, give her some 'E' and then march her out to the parking lot and leave her there.

While she is busy fucking the neighbors, get pictures, bag her clothes and then leave them in the parking lot with her.

He wanted her to have satisfying sex, NOT cuckold him!

Albert needs to get his manhood back by just leaving her now.

Death or Divorce is the only way forward for this man and woman. They are not Man and wife and she is not a loving wife.

for her or he would not let her treat him so badly. This story is not worth the time it takes to read it. So to those who read the comments to find out about a story just skip this one it is a waste of space.

try be a person first you sick fuck.

One of the worst stories ever posted!

How is this different from beating up your wife?

Mental abuse is worse far worse than physical abuse.

A black eye, broken arm will heal. A broken sprite will not.

The wife should be gutted and shot.

Pure crap. Shoot Zofia in the head and anyone else that has used her or him.

Don't write anymore of this crap. Only people who need serious pschologcial help or who are compltete sadists or even psychotic could enjoy this story.

This isn't writing. This is crap. It dehumanizes people, especially Albert and almost raises cruelty to a height not reached since the Nazis lost.

Let me tell you something if you want to be a writer. Writers write with a purpose. Other than objectifying people and showing how really low our species can sink, this has no purpose.

Always have someone with whom the audience can identify. Always have hero(ine). None here.

Write to instruct or please your readers. Only the worst, most depraved piece of shit reader could possibly get any enjoyment out of this.

STOP NOW!

You may want to be a writer but you just haven't got the tool, imagination or talent.

I've enjoyed your creative writing and stories but this one has gone too far with the belittling of Albert to below dog squat. He should just leave his so called wife, no argument just disappear. Zo can marry someone else but at least free Albert.

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Read the first two paragraph's of this steaming pile of dog shit but that was as far a I could go don't touch this one with a 10 foot pole save your time

aYour story, and I use that word loosely here, falls apart right at the beginning. Hubby admits a dark secret. What is the secret? According to him he only wants her to be satisfied. She is against the idea in the beginning but then he is the one who suggests the swingers club. Did he make the reservations or did she? The whole story depends on who did it. If he did then how did the lodge know he was a cuck. If she did why did he put up with that degree of humiliation from the start when all he wanted was for her to be sexually satisfied. This dribble is so full of inconsistancies one can hardly call it a story. Stop, back up and re enroll in creative writing 101. Maybe this time you will pass.

You pathetic twat !!!! Of course this is a biography and you are Albert and I for one will never read from this site again you talentless piece of human filth you disgust me

Great story, ignore all the closet queers who rant and rave, but keep reading cuckold stories. Doesn't get sicker than that now does it?

get a life manless and writer. This shit stinks so bad the flies to the other way.

That has to be the BIGGEST pile of shit I have EVER read, not worth rating.

To her and her friends -

Probably not be he is way past any even horror movie limit -

And I will read no further. You will no doubt wants us to sympathize with Albert, and will have wifey humiliate him. Just remember readers, whatever happens to him, he deserves! When you specifically ask for a certain thing, you CANNOT complain afterwards, when you get it! Whatever happens to him, and whatever she does to him, remember this; He asked for it!

This will most likely be a tale of a wimp, pussy whipped husband secretly desiring to be dominated, and a wife that revels in that domination. Therefore, I shall read no further, thus saving myself the effort of having to criticize it. There are a lot of closet cases out there that glorify in this kind of story, (more of them than I realized), but it's not for me, so here I stop!

When she sat on his face he simply bit a big chunk out of her, sending her to the hospital. While she was gone, he packed, left and filed for divorce. The end to this complete and utter stupidity.

You fucking cuck wimps!!! Write it into The description that this story is about fucking wimp Fagotts!!! So I can stop Reading this shit!!!

5 stars