All Comments on 'The Lokekku's Toll'

by Perky_Goth_Chick

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dreamcatcher7dreamcatcher7over 17 years ago
good

I thought this good, thankyou

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Mmmmmm...

I loved this story. So hot, and well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Scrumptious

Really loved this story. I hope that you add more chapters to it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
wow

This is amazing! Well, all of your stuff is amazing, so no surprise there. ;D

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Loved it!

..a lot!! Will there be a next chapter?

plussevenplussevenover 17 years ago
One of the Best.....

..stories I've ever read here. Stories like this make the ordeal of wading through the bad ones worth it. The dialog is refreshingly good, the characters are well written and the sex is hardeningly described. Your own site, with your own stories would seem a natural progression from here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great story!

I love *all* your stories, and this one just proves how talented you are. Sexy yet funny characters, original plots and great writing... I just hope there'll be a second chapter to this one... Pretty please? ^-^ Keep up your amazing work!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Love it!

That was so funny! You need to write more! She needs to teach him more about the human ways! OW OW!! lol

SheerahSheerahover 16 years ago
Cute and sexy!!!

Ooh, just found this little gem. It was really cute, funny, sexy and erotic. Sigh! Wish they fall in love :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Love it!

Please keep this story going! He should get her pregnant! A demon baby!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Thank You!

As usual, this story was as awesome as the rest. Thank you so much for posting it up! Are you planning on writing more stories? Please do, as you really have great talent. Fun, interesting, candid characters and a fast, slick story make all your submissions great reads. Thanks again!

bbonthe4thbbonthe4thover 14 years ago
Another great little story!

But then, aint they all? It was a lucky happenstance to stumble upon your stuff: you have serious talent, and another fan (one of many, t'would appear...)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awsome!!

You should write more like this! I loved it.

ivorthefirstivorthefirstabout 11 years ago
Please write some more!

This was an excellent story! Thanks for writing it.

Please write some more. =)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Excellent

Could you do another story like this? I love your writing style and the personalities of your characters. Your a favorite.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

A sequel please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

It has been too long!

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