All Comments on 'The Lovely Kat'

Please add more chapters. This will work into such a great story. Great writing.

Thank you! Toying with the idea of writing a prequel. From Kat's POV maybe.

Reading this makes me feel some way. My Lunch break is almost over, but I'm tempted to drive home to my very own mocha goddess. DAMMIT!!

More please!

Thanks for a great story. Please turn it into a series. Your descriptions are vivid and realistic. As you evolve as a writer, these skills will make easy for you to add more plot and background; thus making your stories both romantic and sensual. You have a great future. I look forward to following you in the ensuing months. I wish you well. ChristieP

this is totally hot.. make another one please..you have a talent in writing..

Wow, great story... I checked to see what else you had written and couldn't believe this was yor first submission... Keep going :)

Great idea on Kat POV prequel. I'll keep an eye out for that.

Thank you for a great little read to start my day. I hope you consider adding more to the story, would love to read it.

Thanks for your hard work.

Doc

An amazing hot little story that has now gotten my mind running wild with some fantasies of my own about one of my best female friends. Extremely hot story! I hope to read more by you.

This is a great story please add more you blew me away its simply just one of the best

Simply amazing! I believe this is now my favorite story. The seduction and attention to detail was amazing. I only hope there is a sequel. Either way please keep writing!!

Excellent style. Please keep writing. What happens next?

That was the sexiest thing I have ever read, I spend most of my days dreaming about the day I have an actual lesbian in counter. 💕💕💦

Damn! Got damn! This story burnt my screen. Lovely Kat, welcome to my Top 10 Favorites (for now).

Hallo Secondwind!

A well written and very sexy story.... I love it.... Thank-you!

Gay Kat.

Loved every word of it. By the time that they were walking into the apartment my pussy was literally seeping with pussy juice.

I had a difficult time trying to concentrate on the story because I kept thinking about what was happening and fingering my pussy which was making the bedroom smell like cunt from all the orgasms I was having

My bed is soaked with pussy juice as I'm laying here contemplating calling my girlfriend and inviting her to get over here so that I can eat her pussy before letting her fuck me silly while I am thinking about this story

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Wow! I immediately got wet the moment they began their back & forth with one another. I noticed my hips gyrating while reading this! I came shortly after Jen did. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS STORY!!! I can't wait to read more from u soon!!!

When my husband shattered my heart and we separated just before Christmas 2019, I started thinking about other women for the first time in my life. It started slowly but just kept getting greater and greater. My fantasies started running wild, and the masturbation the most intense of my life. I didn't know what was going on with me. I started reading lesbian erotica more and more, and making love with another woman became practically all I ever thought about, day and night.

But I found your story, Secondwind, entirely in it's own league! I read it over and over again every night for a week, and had so many earth shattering orgasms to your words, and the fantasies and stories I had made up around your story, that I can't even begin to say. I was just so sad that you didn't write more (other than just the Manilla story), because you have such an extraordinary talent!

Your story and all the fun that I was having with it that week made me realize that I didn't know what was holding me back. Why wasn't I making this kind of love happen for real? So I decided and became determined to find a real woman. A couple of weeks later I had sex with another woman for the first time! It was a bit awkward, but I loved it more than I can say. But then a couple of months later I met a bisexual woman that was giving me the same feelings that you describe Jen & Kat having. I'm not exaggerating. Two dates later we were in bed together. Oh my God, it was by far the most incredible sex that I ever had! And it was like, I don't know, like COMING HOME!

I have fallen head over heels in love with this woman. I gave up my apartment at the end of last month and moved in with her. It was the most incredible New Year's gift we could've given each other. I can't even begin to describe the intensity of our love and lust for each other. I mean, sure, there are challenges, especially with this pandemic lockdown we are in right now, but we face them together, hand in hand, and then they are easily overcome or managed. Besides, there is so much mind blowing, earth shattering, volcanic sex that we can barely notice the little problems of every day life. I never knew that I was capable of so many intense orgasms almost every single day, and how much pleasure there can be in giving a lover so many almost daily orgasms as well. There's no question left in my mind: I am a lesbian, and I'm so happy and proud of that!

So, my girl knows about the effect your story had on me last year, and it was she who encouraged me to write this. Since you wrote this more than seven years ago, I'm sure you're not reading this. But I can't thank you enough for your gift. Your story changed my life! Ultimately, it changed two lives in very dramatic ways. Thank you, Secondwind, thank you very much from the bottom of our hearts!

Dam!

The raw eroticism is breathtaking, and so, so hot!

More, please!!

DELICIOUS!!