All Comments on 'The Maid's Oral Agreement'

Loved it, thanks.

Too wham, bam...

No reluctance. No hesitation. No teasing.

Good twist. The blow job was dragged out (too much)

You could have left a hint as to whether the homeowner had left the account with Kim open, that is to say, another day, another ... blowjob? fuck? Not to spell it out, but leave it open in the reader's mind

It was a fun story.

I would have liked for it to be more than one blow job to pay for the Vase over time that developed into much more than just blow jobs. Also reluctance that turns to surrender is always hot.

Good first draft

Why did the last cleaner get fired? Should we assume she left unsatisfactory stains on the furniture, which is why he warned this one?

Reluctant, but not unwilling. And a very nice blow job description. Maybe somewhere down the road she "accidentally" breaks something else and tells him with a smile. Good to see you writing again.

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Love it. A good chuckle.

ROFLMAO omg that twist at the end was hilarious.

Great story!! Hope there’s another in the series :)

I’d love to see more from them. She has two other holes for him to use

not bad and just a blowjob unlike the usual that seems to require taking every hole including the arse hole so much more believable she would have given him a blowjob without the lying about the vars value but guess some folks cant help them self. ok better than a lot of the shit that appears on here

Well that worked out well for hubby! ;->

Clever premise.

But blowjob too rushed. Starting. During. Ending.

Needed more in the way of teasing/foreplay. Needed much longer playing with his cock and balls, with dialog about whether it was being done the way he liked/wanted it.

Did she really have to have to be 38D? Nothing was done to/with them.

Why didn't he have her play with her own pussy while giving him the blowjob?

Why no hint at the possibiility of future/subsequent blowjobs from the maid?

The blowjob from his wife was pretty much wasted. Lacked details. And it seemed as if she certainly had no objection to giving him the kind of blowjobs he wanted.

Three stars.