by reignophelia
What a superb description from inside the mind of a hot, sexy & submissive woman. This story shows your gift for writing and fantasizing - keep it up! Looking forward to much more from you........
that was amazing! not in an erotic masturbation kinda way but deep and compelling way. wow! keep it up
Your character is so intensely human and your writing is so refreshing. The scene is a powerful turn-on, not because it is pornographic (which I define as disembodied sexuality) but because the actions seem part of an integrated human reality. I hope you will write more.
Thank you for sharing. You write wonderfully and are able to bring a character to life that I think a lot of people will be able to connect with.
Seriously, this is a totally hot writing and I don't mean just the sex either. Thank you, I'll look for more stories by you when they post.
The story was hot, however, she never got that human connection. Therefore it left me feeling unsatisfied just like her dismal life. Keep writing.
And bittersweet little tale of a lonely woman and her need to connect with herself by connecting with someone else. The simplicity of the language contrasts with the complexity of a relationship between these two characters who never even meet.