All Comments on 'The Making of a DomiNOT!'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Imteresting

and compulsive reading - I re-read it three times. Would love to see more

eightballbumeightballbumover 17 years ago
Interesting

I too had to read between the lines. I doubt most readers will work their way through to the end. Seemingly a lot of collected thoughts strung together. I'd like to read more of your work however!

Sir_NathanSir_Nathanover 17 years ago
Quirky and different

I think autobiographical work is probably the hardest to tackle along with comedy and you blended the two nicely, despite the slightly sad overall tone. I dunno about anyone else, but I had to read 'the next bit' all the way through. Sign of a good author. Keep at it.

And thanks for the mention. Not sure how it helped though :-P

SN

nympheenympheeover 17 years ago
spot on

I really liked it- when you want something like this, the overal sense is one of frustration; you don't necessarily think in straight lines. I'd love to see how it carries on x

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
to save my marriage.....?

i have to tie his balls up?

but i'm the one who loves the ropes! not fair!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
incredibly touching!

Thank you for your sincerity! If you read Fiction might I suggest Kazuo Ishiguro's "Never Let Me Go." You might see the parallels between decisions made and decisions only thought of.

asiaprofasiaprofover 17 years ago
A well-told tale...

Of true to life complexities in relationships!

What next?

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