by dominot
and compulsive reading - I re-read it three times. Would love to see more
I too had to read between the lines. I doubt most readers will work their way through to the end. Seemingly a lot of collected thoughts strung together. I'd like to read more of your work however!
I think autobiographical work is probably the hardest to tackle along with comedy and you blended the two nicely, despite the slightly sad overall tone. I dunno about anyone else, but I had to read 'the next bit' all the way through. Sign of a good author. Keep at it.
And thanks for the mention. Not sure how it helped though :-P
SN
I really liked it- when you want something like this, the overal sense is one of frustration; you don't necessarily think in straight lines. I'd love to see how it carries on x
i have to tie his balls up?
but i'm the one who loves the ropes! not fair!
Thank you for your sincerity! If you read Fiction might I suggest Kazuo Ishiguro's "Never Let Me Go." You might see the parallels between decisions made and decisions only thought of.
Of true to life complexities in relationships!
What next?