All Comments on 'The Making of a Slave Ch. 01'

Mm mm mmm there is just something sexy about this story. Maybe it has to do with the sexy powerful man. I hope she is a fighter but yet still submissive to him. More more more!

I love it!! So sexy(:

Please don't stop writing. Hurry and write pt. 2 please! I would love to see her fight a lot and him show her who is boss. Details details details(:

Very interest start can't wait to read more...

Donna

No one with the level of assets and sophistication posited for the protagonist here would consider the kind of bet proposed by the antagonist, and her psychological makeup as presented does not permit of an explanation. This renders chapter 1 completely ridiculous.A1AA