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Click here"That was incredible," She whispered, "I love you."
"I love you too, mom. I hope this isn't going to change things."
"Were two adults, Chris, if we're ok with this, then its ok."
I hugged her tightly and said, "We better get cleaned up before Susan gets home."
With that we got up, she wrapped her arms around me and kissed me deeply one last time, then headed for the shower. I pulled my clothes back on and headed back to the kitchen for that sandwich I was after when I first got home.
On nearing the bottom of the stairs I heard a voice coming from the kitchen. It was Susan's. She was talking on the phone and sounded really upset. As I entered the kitchen behind her I realized she was talking to Tammy.
"THEY'RE UP THERE FUCKING RIGHT NOWWW!!" she whispered loudly into the phone, thinking no one would hear.
Then she turned to see me standing there. "Oh crap," I thought.
"I gotta go Tam." And she hung up.
- COMMENTS
mrdata9770over 2 years ago(2/3/2022) This was hot but what the hell, only one sixteen-year-old submission? This should have been the beginning of a series. What a waste of talent. Five stars!
Anonymousover 4 years agoThis needs at least two more chapters. You've got a great start.
C_frommnalmost 7 years agoWhat becomes of Susan and Tammy does the Family go to Hell. Or do the Younger girls get involved. I could see Susan having a thing for her Step Brother. and Keeping Tammy away.
Sex4lf57over 9 years agoIt was a hot story. Too bad we'll never know what happens next as this author was a one and done-er having written this single story over 9 years ago.
Anonymousover 13 years agonot every one has a personal computer some of us have to share or use public computers and can't join sites like this and i'm sure SLASH and the other names aren't real either they may as well be anonymous also so shut up the story isn't finished and the writer is still an asshole for leaving us hanging
DBRS
slash3rrtlover 14 years agoAwesome story, loved the ending. And as for the twat who said 'dont read, the writers an asshole,' dont be a pussy and tell all of us your name. You people sicken me.
Anonymousover 16 years agodon't read this story the writer is an asshole that can't finish what he starts and leaves the reader hanging so if you want a story that is complete look else where
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoThis is one of the best stories i have ever read. When are you going to write a sequeal to it?
Anonymousover 19 years agoYou know how much I like this one. Don't forget me when you write the next part. *wink*
BUICK GSover 19 years agoWell she seems more jealous than upset. Did mom confess out at the pool maybe that she was hot for the kid? Did the sister have a crush on the guy maybe? Because her best bud knows he likes her but she won't have anything to do with him past friendship. Many ways to take this story. Let us be real there is not really many plots that have not been hit up on. That is for those who says this predictable. Most stories on here are easy to see where they may lead, but are fun to read none the less. So I say write on the way you want to as it is your story to write anyway you see fit. And happy endings are better than sad endings anyday. Isn't there enough sadness in the world?
Anonymousover 19 years agoit seems this plot is over used:
boy gets one family member (this case mom)
boy gets next (i predict sis)
next comes the sis/mom orgy, and everyone loves each other.
boy gets friend of sister/or 3rd sis
all live happily every after...maybe a baby...or everyone break up happily off to colleges without any family strain, finding happy parters to share life with afterward.
- or it dies out after a few chapters when author looses interest.
and they are never discovered....
i really hope this varys from the predictable tired old formula.
good writing so far.
gbaron64over 19 years agoOk Mom's toast. There's still Susan, Tammy and who knows who else that this guy could get into. Aren't you going to keep it going? I hope so!!
Anonymousover 19 years agoThis story was amazing, but you have got to write another chapter to it. I have to find out what was going on with his sister and how their relationship is going to evolve
Anonymousover 19 years agoVery hot story. It held my interest and built to a nice climax. Looking forward to chapter two. Thanks again.
Anonymousover 19 years agoGood story! Great cliffhanger!!! Don't keep us in suspense too long now! See ya next story.
