by JamieB
What a waste of my time.
What on earth are a bunch of words which went nowhere, doing in this site?
A story has a start and finish and in between all the words necessary to draw a picture of proceedings.
Try again, this time at least give us the basics.
Sorry.
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A very well written and well thought out story. I also gave you 5s for your two BDSM story. I really enjoyed the change in the woman in the story when she heard the word "girl" to her reaction at the end. My submissive wife says she "Just melts when I call her girl"
You write very well. Keep up the good work.
Mike S.