All Comments on 'The Man Who would be Queen Ch. 10'

You do know this is a erotic story site. Please include some type of erotica or true crossdressing. Your story is dragging on way to slow with way to short chapters. You said you were developing characters. I think after 10 chapters they are developed. Now please give us something exciting to read

Really like this story but it is short on the erotica

I disagree with the anons, buildups are fine. I would just like more of the story. Thanks for sharing

Is killing me!

I'm sure the slow buildup from this chapter is deliberate and I, as always, can't wait until the next chapter.

R/

Barbara

Don't listen to the complainers it's been a great story so far keep it up