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by Kayadale

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I really like this!

What a great story! You've set up a delicious premise. I really like your writing style, so crisp and vivd!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Keep it going!!!

LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!! Can't wait to see what her family thinks of the impromptu wedding and what the King as to say to his friend. You have a great talent!

Sidney43Sidney43over 11 years ago

Sounds like she either married a close relative, or her Father's worst enemy. The rest of the story should be interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Luv it!

She's probably the girl he protected from the fire. Keep up the good work. :-)

kinky019kinky019over 11 years ago
Can't Wait!!

Can't wait for more please update soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Get a bit more real with the history!

I do like the story, but for crying out loud...a "priest?" The last Catholic King of England was 400 years ago. And an instant marriage contract? This is not Las Vegas.

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