by fabledfaerie
Disney took the plot from Hans Christian Andersen
Plenty of original thought here and a better ending.
your are a rip off you didn't come up with any of this on your own.your no writer we can all see that.this is from Disney.
The writing itself is good but the plot was too similar to the Disney movie with the names changed
It's great that you took the original Little Mermaid plot but added your own twist to it! I enjoyed it so much! Keep writing, please!