All Comments on 'The Mirror Ch. 01'

You can't stop with no action. Either you write longer in order to include some action or you include it beforehand.

This said, the story has a very good start.

There ain't nothing wrong with checking out a persons good features. As for the staring, ur in a bar, it happens get over it. I hope this guy finds contentment somehow, I ain't fond of the idea of "curing" an interest that isn't so uncommon.

A good storyline but should have had some type of heated action before ending the chapter.

This is the 21st century< the days of women smacking men in bars for looking are over. He is in his right to defend himself from all 3 women, & file a complaint with the police.

Just to let readers know that The Mirror consists of 6 chapters, and that they are now all posted.