by Juggling Fool
..wonderful story JF...just like I knew it would be. I like that you weave a story. It's not just about the sex, but about how they feel for each other, the love they share and the emotion they feel for each other...its great that your two characters have rediscovered their desire for each other. *hugsss* rangergirl
omg Juggs..that was wonderful, hot, sexy, and just plain ol' WOW!
..it took ya long enough to write part 2......
How long before part 3???
love ya Juggies.
Dear Foolie,
You did it again, my dear Fool! The relationship you create for these two just gets deeper and more intimate. Great detail and settings. The action is completely hot!
It just all feels real and easy to relate to -- because it could be any of us in that story. What a gift you have for that!
Once again...great job! A true definition of erotica.
*hugs*
LilyT
Mmmm.....so well written. I can imagine myself there. You make your stories come alive. Keep up the good work Fool.....hugs
Dreambaby
I apologize for neglecting to comment on this for so long. :)
Excellent plot development, intriguing character interaction, and just...well, downright yummy.