All Comments on 'The Misadventures of Elena Ch. 01'

It may be a little rough around the edges, but you are a good storyteller. Thantor seems to me like a dark elf in an orcs body. "Well whoever you marry will just have to settle for sloppy seconds!" XD Well done frog7, and thanks for the entertaining read. I'll watch for the next one :)

-Ax

The delivery ruined the whole thing

Just started this series, nice begining. I like that Orc/Elves/Humans stuff with some reluctants.