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Click here"No, you're not," I said as I stood up straight after she finished wiping my back. "I'm not sorry either. That was the sexiest thing that has ever happened to me."
"Oh, it can get a whole lot sexier," Robin said, leering at me while making a display of licking her lips. "And it will, I promise you. There won't be a crease, crevice or orifice left unused come dawn. That much I promise you."
I goggled. "You mean even...?" I pointed at my bottom.
"Oh yeah, especially that hole. But it won't be the only one."
"You mean my vagina and mouth."
"Well yeah, of course," she said. "But I was also thinking your ears. You haven't experienced a real fuck until you've had an earfuck."
"My ears!" For a moment I wondered if Trina had somehow managed to hack my audio filter again. "You can't be serious."
"I'm dead serious," Robin told me. "And then there's your nose. But that will have to wait, you need more experience before I nosefuck you."
"My nose?" Suddenly I felt faint and I stumbled backwards, falling on Robin's bed. "There's no way you can actually do that. I mean there's no way it would fit."
"Sure it will," she said. "Look at how small and tight your little pussy is. Someday a baby is gonna come out of that thing. The human body is incredibly stretchable. Hell, someday you'll do threesomes no, problem. A cock up each nostril."
I passed out.
***
When I came to the first thing I saw was Robin's worried face. "Maralee! Shit, I'm so sorry, Sweetie. I thought you knew I was joking. I'm not really going to try to fuck you in your ear or your nose."
"Does this mean you're not going put your penis in my anus as well?"
"Oh, hell yes I'm gonna fuck your tight little asshole," Robin said. "You'll be walking funny for days."
Two days to be precise. And I didn't much enjoy sitting down either.
Ignore the philistines who wouldn't know a good story if it were forcibly inserted into their sensory experience, this is amazing work. The character exposition at the outset was great, Fuckshit is so adorable, and the innocence-with-little-flourishes-of-worldliness to her narration for me set exactly the right tone. A sort of olden times coziness maybe. Great characters, great writing, the porn was sort of just a bonus. Those are always the best stories.
Great science fiction. I thought the sabotoged sensorium bits were funny, and loved the way the differences between Maralee's world (a world where I imagine John Varley would feel very comfortable) and ours were revealed gradually, teasingly. Nice erotic interludes and even a bit of a message about what it's like to be different than the norm and to have secrets about that difference (like so many gays, transfolk and intersex individuals on this world...) that can keep you feeling alone and abnormal, especially if you let fear control you. Would have liked to read about Robin making love to "Fuckshit" when she's all limbless and helpless and vulnerable, the trust it would take and how it might even heighten her experience ..... but that's just my kink & my own fantasies. -Laika P.
It took me a while to read this story as I was cumming at the end of each page. Please keep up this story or write a sequel
I definately liked it. I usually don't go for this kind of... fetish, but I was sucked in by the setting overall story. I actually found myself not asking myself when the sex would show up. Definately make this a long series. 5/5
There is a second part coming. It's all written and mostly edited. Just needs some final touching up and maybe an added scene. Should be up within the next week or so. Less world building in the second part. I mean, yeah, that would have been a lot of world building just for 15k words.