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by gothgodess

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Enjoying the story

and all the spelling mistakes. I wonder if you are not doing them on purpose sometimes? eg: wondering if he was still their instead of there. There are others but... Just nit picking I guess. I am enjoying the story so far though. 3 stars.

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